My new Writing Goal

MY WRITING GOAL

I have achieved my writing goal

DETECTIVE DICTIONARY

I can correct my spelling mistakes using my detective dictionary.  Can you see the red pen?  I am going to have a go at using the dictionary books in room 6 to find some spelling by myself.

My writing goal

My story that I wrote

Remember when I was in the library and I found pandemonium? I wrote a story about going to the library and looking for the words. I used red pen to edit my story and used the dictionary to find out the right words. I added in questions to hook my reader in. 

Next time I am going to think about which way my letters go, like my Z, and where my full stops should be. 

Here is my story: