My Recount Writing

Hey there guys I haven't posted on my blog in quite awhile so I thought that I should share my recent writing that I think is great!
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My Cross Country Writing

A few days ago I finished my writing about the Frankley school cross country and I was really proud on how the writing turned out. Here is the writing :)

Here we are again these dumbest day in school EVER! Cross country. My heart was tearing in half as I waited for my age and gender to be called.

Finally Mrs Morris called us to the finish line. My arms quivered with worries, my throat was like a desert. The finish line screamed at me to take a step back. My heart was pounded out of my chest. The butterfly stabbed through my stomach.

On your marks, get set GO!! I ran to the muddy grooty green gate. Then I was done I couldn’t even get over the stairs. Running up the farm was  horrible my breath was running out every miler second. The smell of poo grossed me out. It smelt sour and like fresh rhubarb.

Then I finally finished going through the hot farm. I ran through the orchid waiting for the most dreading part. The hill. The hill is steep and and you can barely walk up it. Once I got up the hill I walked till I got to TUHONO. My eyes glazed on the 5 people in front of me. I placed my hand on my head, suddenly my hand was wet.

After another lap of the school I was approaching the finish line, all my friends were screaming for me and Aimee. It felt amazing finishing. Me and Aimee were dragging our feet to the water fountain. Our mouths rested as the first drop of water touched our tunge. THE END

My Math Strategies- Geomerty

Hi, Welcome back to my blog. Today I will be telling you about my new Math Strategies goal, we have recently changed our Math Strategies to Geometry. So my goal is to do Isometric Drawings and Making Cube Models. We have to use Isometric dot paper, a ruler, a pencil and uni cubes. Here on the top left we have a cube on Isometric dot paper, and we do a lot more harder work on this paper this is just an example of how it works. I have been working very hard on this and I hope you liked this post.
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CUBE ON ISOMETRIC DOT PAPER

ISOMETRIC DOT PAPER

A RULER

A PENCIL

UNI CUBES

"Tahi Rua Toru" Tech Progress

Hi welcome back to my blog, I'm going to be showing some things that are going on with our Tech challenge. So I will be telling you the name and the purpose and whats happening with it.

So first I will tell you the Name of the app, it is called OZONE. Why? Because this is a relaxation and calming app that can help with depression and stress. So why did we call it OZONE? Because calling it OZONE reminded us of our Own Zone, and we could be in a special place which is just our Own Zone. But to add a twist we thought OZONE would be better, So that explains why the name is OZONE.

Next we have the Purpose of the app. So the purpose is to stop depression and stress and anger. It has a Mood Tracker Page, Depression page and Meditation page. But still what is the purpose? Well there has been a lot of suicide thoughts and bad things happening around us in our community, sad enough they have mostly been kids that have had suicidal thoughts. Me and Haka have aimed this app at kids although adults can still use this app.

Here are some photos of what its looking like so far. This is your sneak peek. :)

Hydro Slide Recount

Up really high, my hands shook like the washing machine on full. Miniature bumps grew on my skin.

All of a sudden it turned pitch black,it felt like the dark had taken me away.


Hi these are some sentences from my latest Writing Hydro Slide Recount. These sentences demonstrate my goal witch is Show not tell if you would like to read more click this link. Click here to read the full story.

My ANZAC WIT Art

Hi there this is my ANZAC WIT Art. I made all by myself, it took a little bit of time, not to long and not to short. So the story of this is the Gollipoli story. So what happened is ANZAC came to the back of Gallipoli thinking they will freak them out and win. But when they got to the back the Germans,  Russians and the French were on higher ground and shot below. Heres a little something the man said hows in Gollipoli "Your Men are now in the soil of a friendly place.". Here is my artwork.

W.I.T

Hi This is my Wit Work.
My title is: Whats Going To Happen Next?
My Message is: Whats more important- more space for houses, or our native Kahikatea trees and our precious NZ birds.
The Reason I chose This piece of artwork: 

My artwork shows a kiwi about to get crushed by a tree. I used Cubism for my artwork as it would make it pop more.

The reason I created this picture because my Grandad lived n a farm right next to a bush. When you walked into that bush you would suddenly hear the kiwis and their beautiful songs His dad sold the farm, and about 2 months later they drove past and the bush was not there.

That tree is an kahikatea tree. We have three of them at our school and we want to protect that from happening to our special kahikatea trees as they are native to no and have a lot to do with our Frankley School environment.

That's why I choose this message and art.